Today we saw a few presentations and were able to give feedback on how the presenters were doing with their projects. Here are my reviews:
Sarah:
Major Argument: Vocal Achord is a fun vocal group with a sense of whimsy and excitement, and you should join.
Strengths: Both designs were really strong and striking, the visual appeal is a great way to draw in potential members and inform them about the group.
Areas for Improvement: It will be even more striking and appealing with some color; however too much color could take away from the neatness and clean overall design.
Charlie:
Major Argument: Club Indigo is a great way to connect with elderly people in the community, hear great stories, socialize, and have a good meal.
Strengths: Good flow, the presentation offers a lot of useful information and doesn't leave the viewer with any questions about what the main argument is.
Areas for Improvement: Adding some slides to break up the information would give the viewer more time to read the slides and get all the information before slides transition.
James:
Major Argument: Piracy online is a major issue and is very costly.
Strengths: Good color contrast and visuals, draws the viewer in. Also lots of statistics give the poster ethos.
Areas for Improvement: Make the main argument more clear, better define exactly what the poster is arguing. Also, make sure to cite sources for statistics
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